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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

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    The given line graph compares the unemployment rate in two countries: US and Japan from 1993 to 1999. As is observed from given graph, initially unemployment rate in the US was much higher than it was in Japan.

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    The line graph compares the proportion of unemployed people in the US and Japan through the period from March 1993 to March 1999. It is obvious that the unemployment rates of these two countries changed oppositely - while it decreased in the USA, it increased in Japan.

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