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This is a bar chart of the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods. In 1970, Most of Men were studying part-time but from 1980, studying part-time was decreased and studying full-time was increased and in 1990, it was twice as many students as in 1970. On the other hand, Women studying full-time were increased and not only full-time, part-time also were increased. in 1990, studying full-time was three times as many students as in 1970. If compare Men and Women, as you see, in 1970, Men were studying more than women full-time or part-time but it changed from 1980 and then, in 1990, Women were studying part-time more than Men and studying full-time was same number. It shows you Women has a high education now.

According to this graph, the number of men and women in further education in Britain shows the following pattern. In the case of male, the number of male has declined slightly from about 1000 thousands in 1970/71 to about 850 thousands in 1990/91. However, this figure rose back to about 850 thousands in 1990/91 from about 820 thousands in 1980/81. The proportion of full-time education has declined during this period. However, the proportion of part-time education has increased dramatically. On the other hand, in the case of female, the number of both full-time education and part-time education has increased during this period. From about 700 thousands in 1970/71, these figures rose to about 820 thousands in 1980/81, to about 1100 thousands in 1990/91. In terms of full-time education, this figure rose by about 260 to about 900 in 1990/91. On the other hand, with respect to part-time education, this figure rose dramatically between 1980/81 and 1970/71. However this figure rose slightly between 1980/81 and 1990/91.

The graph shows the percentage of audiences over 4 yrs old of UK follows the radio and television throughout the day during the period October - December 1992. It has been observed from the graph that less than 10% audiances follows the radio at 6:00 am and the percentage raised to a pick around 30% at 8 AM and decline gradually to around 10% during the period 2:00 to 4:00 PM and again raised a bit to around 12% between 4:00 to 6:00 PM. It has again dropped to below 10% at around 10 PM. The rate again raised to a bit between 10.00 PM to 12.00 PM and then dropped slowly by 4:00 AM. On the other hand, the rate of television audiances raises 0-10% during the period 6:00 to 8:00 am and remain steady up to 10.00 AM and then gradually goes down by 12.00 Noon. The percentage raised dramatically to around 15% by 2:00 PM which again raised to a pick above 40% between 6.00 - 8.00 PM and then gradually dropped between the period 12:00 PM to 4:00 AM.

The bold graph shows the television audiences throughout the day. It shows that the percentage of audiences is zero percent in early morning but it gradually rises upto ten percent at 8:00 am and maintains the same for the next two hours. There is a slight fall in percentage in next two hours however after that it rises sharp upto twenty percent within the next two hours. After this the graph rises very fast and attains it's peak at 10 pm which is about forty five percent. The the graph gradually falls down and at 2:00 am it is at five percent. The thinner graph shows the percentage of radio audiences. Unlike the television one the peak percentage of the radio audiences is at 8:00 am which is about 30 percent. Then it gradually falls and it corrosponds with the television one at two pm. After that it gradually falls but with a small incrase in percentage at 4:30 to 6:00 pm. The percentage of audiance then gradu. goes down and at four Am it is the lowest which is near 2 percentage. These graphs proves the progressive propularity of television.

Bricks are small shaped figures which are used for building. First of all digger dig the ground untill the clay level. Next the type of sticky earth that is used for making bricks are on the metal grid which selected special parts of clay and throws them on the roller. Then in the manufacturing process sand + water are filled in. The sand gives the texture for bricks. After that the solid is put ready to go through wire cutter or moulding. This process makes shapes of the bricks. When the figures have got their shape, these items can be put in the drying oven, where they stayed for 24-48 hours. The temprature is moderate between 200°C and 980°C in the kiln and high between 870°C and 1300°C. Finally these hot items go to the cooling chamber and get cold from 48-72 hours. The last part of the manufacturing proces is packaging and delivery to the consumption.

Dear Sir, I am writing a report about brick manufacturing. The following are as follows. Brick manufacturing starts with choosing good quality clay. A large digger similar to a crane digs the clay. The process takes about half a day. after which it is put on metal grid to separate unwanted silt and impurities. The strained clay is then put in a large machine roller where it is mixed with sand and water to be moulded later to form the base of the brick. while it is still soft, wire cutters are used to perfectly cut the bricks, removing the rough edges. The soft, bricks are then put in a drying oven where it stays from 24-48 hours. After the pre-set drying time, the bricks are then put in large kilns where it is baked at moderate heat of about 200-980°C. The bricks are first put in moderate heat to avoid cracking. After about few minutes, the bricks are then fired to a high 870-1,300°C heat. This is the final heating or 'cooking' stage so to speak for the bricks. Just beside the kiln is the cooling chamber which is made up of large steel where the bricks will stay for about 48-72 hours. The bricks are then ready for packaging where the brick workers carefully pack the bricks in large container vans for delivery. The whole process is fairly an easy one because there are no sophisticated machines used. The only thing that bothered me was during the heating process because as the manager told me, I have to stay and observe while the clay is being 'cooked' because some of the clays do tend to crack easily because of the wrong sand and water mixture from the start IF this happened, the process has to be repeated again which can be quite lengthy.

Brick Manufacturing The process by which clay bricks are manufactured for the building industry can be outlined in seven consecutive steps. First the raw material, clay, which lies just below the surface of soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be dug up by a digger. Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid, in order to break up the big chunks of clay into much smaller ones, which fall through the metal grid onto a roller, whose motion further segregates the bits of clay. Sand and water are added to make a homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or cut into brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter. Those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time. The dried bricks are then transferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high temperature oven. First they are kept at a moderate temperature of 200°C - 980°C, then at a high temperature of 870°C - 1300°C. This process is followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber. Once the bricks have bee cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and delivered to their final destination, for example be it a building site or storage.

I disagree that point about children brought up in families. because, I show that situation arounds me at our country parents. They want they had everything give to their children. but, their behavior is not good effect to them. On the other hands, children brought up by wealthy parents, they are strong, that means, they can do prepare to deal with the problems of adult life In my case, I start work from 20 ages I had social experience and I got a money for myself. however, My age is late to work by children ages and I heard about child doing work by another countries that countries had a culture about childrens That is they doing work for their pocketmoney. they could their money buy something or entrance to the bank. also, our country children's do this. but, many children's accept the money by their parents. which persons got a pocketmoney over the 20 ages. I think, if children's had a work and they study at money, they perfectly prepared their adult life after they must be parents.

I greatly support the idea about Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. I support it, because of the following reason - Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are raise in a certain psychological values. Such as the value of hardworking, dicipline, they are used to be in the condition where money doesn't come easily. They have to earn it, work for it. Oppose to it, a child who comes from a wealthy family is used to have money all the time. Whenever they wanted something, the money is eacilly gave to them as if everyday are their birthday. Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are well-trained to face adulthood. They are well-prepared to see the fact that the world is a very tough place. They watched their parent everyday worked very hard just to put food on the table. They have the advantage to see the reality and embrace it, set their mind that they too have work hard for their future, their own dreams, their authentic self. A child that came from a wealthy family doesn't always have this advantage. Thic is because their eyes are blinded by the power of money, that their parent has. They also have a dicadvantage of a family love life. Commonly wealthy parents express love by money. They love their children, so they bought them cars, expensive clothes, toys, but they are never home when their children needs them. The basic

I do agree to the statement that children brought up in poor families are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. Children of poor parents are prematurely exposed to the problems of adult life eg. learning to survive on a low family income, and sacrificing luxuries for essential items. These children begin to see the 'realities' of life in their home or social environment. Their parent's own struggles serve as an example to them. These children are taught necessary skills for survival as an adult from a very early age. Many children eg work in the weekends or holidays to either collect some pocket money or even contribute to their families' income. A good example is the many children who accompany their parents to sell produce at the market. They are making a direct contribution to their families in terms of labor or income. Children of poor families also are highly motivated. They tend to set high goals to improve their economic situation. A relevant example would be Mr Bill Gates (founder of Microsoft Corporation) He had an impoverished background but he used his talent and motivation to set up the worlds largest computer organisation. However, there are some problems that children from poor backgrounds do encounter. Many of these children who are 'robbed' of their childhood eg while working, may feel cheated. They often turn to crime. This however, is a small group. In summing up, children with impoverished backgrounds are able to deal with problems of adult life because of early exposure, family role models and sheer motivation.

International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time there is concern about it's impaction on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantapes of international tourism outweight the advantapes? In my opinion advantapes outweight the disadvantapes. Firstly, many countries like Egypt or Tailond live from tourism. Lots of people work there as a seilomens or tourist guides. These countries without support of tourists wouldn't be able to function properly. Secondly, in countries visited by tourists are plenty of places where people just can't pass because of rare animals or pleuts. Another thing is that people like traveling and seeing new exotic places. They like lie on the beach or swim in ocean. Furthermore, tourism is now more growing industry highering tousands of people. There are makeing new places to work and to have fun. But on the other hand, people often forget that they aren't the only beings on the plenet. Many tourists are living garbage just anywhere. Some of them want an exotic suvenir so they pay for illegal things like dead or live animals or some sculpure. To sum up I think international traveling is a good thing but people must realise that there is something else besides them. They need to know that flora and fauna needs to be protected. People have to enjoy their holidays but alsow protect environment.

'Tourism' - friend or foe? Tourism is a very big industry in the modern time and is growing quite rapidly. Thousands of people travel everywhere to various destinations every year. Arguments have come up regarding the benefits and negative impacts of tourism on places and on its local inhabitants and environment; however, I believe there are more advantages than disadvantages of international tourism. People travel for various reasons; we travel for business purpose, holidays, visit friends and relatives etc. Travelling is mostly seen as a recreational activity. Tourism has many advantages. Tourism can play a tremendous part in a countrys economy, the more tourists visit a country and spend money there the better it is for the country; that way more money is circulated within the country and even the stability of their currency rate of exchange persists if not improve. Vendors and shops get to sell more goods and make an income. Tourism also has its non-monetary advantages; it brings cultures and people closer. People from all around the world get to share their culture with each other and even learn more. This is a good opportunity in education. Tourism seems to have some disadvantages too; However, I believe the problems caused by tourism are not something that cannot be solved or prevented. A lot of people believe that tourism can destroy or deviate culture and cause quite an impact on visited locations such as pollution and littering. People can adhere to their own beliefs and way of life if they want to; no one can really forcefully influence someone to change from their morals and ethics Pollution can be avoided by increasing usage of environmental friendly vehicles used for tours and rents, warnings and visual education on littering and smoking, Specific times can be allocated for tours to certain areas, such as peak times where local inhabitants feel uncomfortable due to too many foreigners. Where there are problems there can always be solutions. Tourism brings great amount of advantages for any place in many ways and is a 'win-win' exchange process. The very few problems caused can always be avoided or taken care of. I believe tourism should be highly promoted, specially in traditional and poor countries with natural beauty such as Bangladesh.

5th. March 1996 Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my room-mate. As you know we share one room, I can not study in the room at all any more if I still stay there. She always has friend visiting and has parties in the room. They make lots of noise and switch on the radio very loudly, for me this environment is very difficult to study and I need a quiet room. Even borrows my things without asking, it is very impolite. I request you can give me a new room next term because I have been asked her has parties in other place many times they still have parties in the room. I really can not stay in the same room with her. I would be grateful if you could change me a single room. Your faithfully, Catherine.

Accommodation Officer 13, Kings Road Edinburgh Dear Sir, Dear Madam, I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with my room mate and request for another accommodation next term. My main problem is that I cannot study in my room because my room-mate always has friends visiting. He also has parties, which usually ends early in the morning, several times a week. Furthermore he often borrows my things without asking me. I cannot accept this situation any longer. Especially because I have very imporant exams next term and I really must study hard. This is why I would be very grateful if I could have another room next term. It would be most convenient for me if I haden't to share my room with somebody else. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. yours faithfully, Anja Schweizer

DEAR SIR OR MADAM The local public library wants to make improvements to. their services and facilites. In order to get ideas the public. The local public library need to bring old and new boock from all countris. That is the becuse All people want to know for the world Stories The local public library want to big spece for cabinet to put good type line for the boock. Their is resolt becouse when peopel came to the library to get a boock easily. your library dont huve boock properly becouse their are one boock is another plese and another is another line so not get a easeur. The every boock put line with each cuntry to gether an year put difrent difrent year put sepred. Then your library put cline and good type and good man. Even you cane put man to give people servis at home to dileverd for boock som old piople are problem to come your library to take boock that is my opinion for your local public library want your fiyethfuly

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm going to suggest some of my ideas about our local library Fist of all I would like to have a bigger parking space so that it will be more easyer for those who use the library This parking space can be done undernet the library which it will be provided with a lift. I think that this is the main problem for those who came to the library because everyone talkes about it and argue for the time wasthing to park the car around so by means of this idea the main problem can be solved. Another thing that I want to see to be ganged is to give the place a new look because it has been like this for at least 25 years. I would suggest to make a new referbisment like painting, carpentry work and more natural light espacially inside by means of big windows and sky lights. I even suggest that there can also be a small lift because elder people con take advantage of this too. In conclution the costomer care section must be prepared also to help people finding books more quicker and give them some advice as well so that this local public library will be more efficent to all kind of people

Dear Sir or Madam, This is im reference to your enquiry regarding The Suggestions to library I would like give opinion im this regard. I visited the library So many times and found facilities and Problem Side by Side. A library must Consist of Substantial amount of books, CDS and Cassets. These material Should be Placed and Organise im a Scientific manner So thet most of the people Can be benefited im the Same time. Im your library I liked the numbers of books you have. It almost Covers the major part of the requirment of People but the availability of the books at the right Place and time is the biggest Concern. In library Seating arrangements are very good too. The opening and Closing Timing realy Suits the People. But, the Situation is not at its best. You dor not have the facolity of Electronic material which you normally finds now a days. As I said the Placement of books must be given attention. I have also faced Problems when wanted to take away the books. you Should relax the Problem in this Procedure. Library Should be Calm and Safe. All the books Should be arranged as Per Catalog. This Sequential arrangement will not only ease the Pressure on Staff but also reduce the Complaints. More Electronic equipments Should indulg im the library facilities and matter available im the Shelves. Thanking you for your efforts to improve the Services for the better mant of the people im the locality.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my opinion about library services and send some suggestions to improve your operation. I have been using your library services for 25 years and even my son has started to use it as well. I really enjoy of your personel staff and the way they serve the library users. They are always polite, friendly and easy find what you want to. The library is equipped with the comfortable furniture which helps user to feel freely and work efficient. You also have the reading room with the daily newspapers, magazines and other informatic resources. I really appreciate all above-mentioned things in your library. But, I have some concerns I would like to share with you. The thing is I can not find anymore the recent edition books or books of authors of the current century. Of course, I understand we can always find them in the bookstores or in Internet. But everybody will agree with me that there is a great pleasure to read a book alive than in computer or others.resources. So, it would be nice if you check with your management to update it. And plus, I know, it would be costly but may be saving your time, to buy a computer and load a data base of your collection of books. We live and work in the 21st of century. That is all I would like to share with you. Yours faithfully,

who should be responsible for our People. It's true that the old Peoples situation gets worse in the many countries. The first question must be what they wants and what they needs?. Especially their necessity are more benefit more respect more quiet life. If they have been working for a long time, in the any company or in the Public sector, and when they get old that's means during their retiring retire's time, company or Goverment must be responsible of their welfare, it's just my opinion. They should take care of them. In addition to company or Goverment. If they have good money they can look after theirselves, we can do something to make easier their life. for example an organization, or a voluntary association, unions. The families or Relatives's responsibility depends on their wealthy situations. If they could do, they should do anything. Goverments or their former place could supply them with life insurence and a good Social Security policy. The Social community center or old age Pensioner like in the Britain, are very useful for them. For All of them life is hard and gets harder in the their old ages. They expect more attention for and good life. The old People, if don't want lost them we should do anything that what we're able to do. İ. BOZYİL P. Bozyil

Who should be responsible for our old people? One of the most challeging problems of today's society is the question who should be responsible for our old people. It's not only a financial problem but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay I would like to four different models Firstly, the company can be responsible for their retired employees. For this reason a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is, if you belief in the capitalist system, that it should be the cheapest solution. A possible problem is that the companies might have competition disadvantage due to higher staff costs. A second solution is that the goveunment has to take the responsibilitiy for the old people's care. It can finance this with its tax incomes. Actually, this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the persent situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well. The govermneent can no longer afford supporting all the old peoples. Another way of solving this problem is to give back the responsibilitiy to the individual. That means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the time after their retirement. This seems to be not a very fair model because their will certainly exist people who can't afford to save part of their salary. In this case the govermument would have to care for them. A last solution is to go back to the old model of the "big family" who cares for all their members. I don't think this is possible in our days society because the family structures have so much changed. To sum up I have to admitt that I can't find a really good solution for this problem. All models have advantges and disadvantage. Certainly we have to think about this topic much more in the future

I think shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity. For example Tee Tree Plaza Shopping Cener as a biggest shopping center in Adelaide. I'm working at the take way shop in the T.T.P Shopping Center. There are huge number of costmer working around in the center every day. Many people buy lots of foods, drinks, clothes and they are hand carry or they put in the trolly. On the other hand some peple are only window shopping. I sometime worry about people who bought many things into trollys, because I think may be they are use money alot, and also some ladies who wear a looks expencive juellies. I have one friend who bankrupt his self, because he had a expencive car, a expencive cloth, etc. I think bad effect is many loan campany established these year. People easy to borrow money from loan campany and easy to go to bankalpt. People must concider about when they go to the shopping. Therefore before buy something people must consider about shopping such as for your self.

Shopping as a leisure activity is an issue that araises an endless debates. There are, therefore, many arguments about positive and negative effects, In this essay I am writing to about the reasons of shopping's popularity and the effects on individuals and on society To begin with, shopping is regarded as a kind of leisure activities such as sports, reading books and watching movies. Sometimes shopping makes a person feel relexed, it is especially true for people who have a lot of money. Most of all many shopper feel proxy satisfaction when they have the right to choose something. Of course the effects of its popularity depend on individuals and society. But there are a number of effects on individual and society in general Over consumption is a major problem. The excessive preference of shopping might result in over consuming And abnormal consumption lead to a violence of nature To satisfy consumers' need, a lot of companies have to exploit the nature The excessive consumption beyond normal shopping is responsible for social tension and class divisions. Because many person who can not effort to buy life commodities might feel anti-society attitude. from the above we considered two issues. These are very important issues because shopping is an inevitable part of our life. In the future I can hope that shoppers have to consider the influence on the other persons, the nature and society. And the government educate the general public do sound consumption

Shopping is very popular among the majority of the population, despite their age or social standards. This is due to the fact that most people find shopping as an experience which makes a difference in their day to day life Some people find themselves in a different world, surrounded by various material things which they may or may not be able to purchase. Even if they are not able to finance these, they find much pleasure in looking and feeling these things and imagining owning them some day, some people go shopping when they really want to purchase things and they prefer to look around and compare the prices before buying them. I think most people love to go shopping because, then they could meet friends, make contacts with people, and get to know what is in the latest trend. It provides them a pleasant distraction from their routine and sometimes dull life. The most important effect shopping has on an individual is that it nourishes the self-esteem, An individual may find the social-contact most gratifying and this makes people come out of their shells and be more extrovert. Purchasing something, as well as knowing that you are financially able to purchase something give more self confidence to people. The increase in popularity to go shopping has many effects on the society. People may be encouraged to go into new businesses and it will improve the economy. More job opportunities will be created for people in these businesses. Encouraged by the increase of popularity manufacturers will try to improve their products, so that the consumers can have a wide range of products at competitive prices. The overall quality of the product as well as the services provided by the sales staff will be improved. More job opportunities will be created in advertising as the manufacturers try to sell their product Consumers will have a better knowledge of the product so that they will not be misleaded by inferior quality products. I find shopping an interesting and pleasurable experience, as each year passes by, simply because it enriches my heart and mind.

The chart gives you information on how children travelled to and from school in the years 1990 and 2010. The modes of transport were by car, walking, cycling, walking and by bus and by bus only. A striking feature in this chart is that the number of children who travelled by car has increased from 1990 to 2010. In 1990 the most number of trips per year by children were by walking. However in 2010 it reduced to up to 6 million trips per year. The total number of trips to school by cycling and walking and bus were approximately 6 million in 1990. However the number of trips to school by cycling reduced to 2 million and the number of trips to school by walking and bus reduced to about 3 million in 2010. There isn’t a significant change to the number of trips to school by bus. In 1990 it was about 7 million and in 2010 it came down to approximately 5 million. In 1990 the amount of children who travelled to and from school by car was significantly lower than the children who travelled by walking. In contrast in 2010 the number of children who travelled to school by car increased and the number of children walking to school has decreased. In 2010 children travelled to school by bus more than they cycled to school.

The statistice show the number of tripe mad by children in one country over the past to years to travel to end from school using different modes of transport. children walking (13 million) are the by far highset, while, the children use bus (7 million) are a bit higher than the children use car in 1990. However, The children use car (11 million) in 2010 significant higher than The children use bus (5 million) in 2010. In contrest, The children walking (6 million) are Twice as high as the children use cycling (3 million) in 2010. overall, At the end priod there were 12,000,000 children walking in 1990, 11,000,000 children use care in 2010 and 5,000,000 children use bus.

I completly disagree with the written statment. I believe that most of the people in the world have more information about their health and also about how they can improve their healthy conditions. Nowadays, information about how harmful is to smoke for our bodies can be seen in many packets of cigars. This is a clear example how things can change from our recent past. There is a clear trend in the diminishing of smokers and if this continues it will have a positive impact in our health. On the other hand, the alimentation habbits are changing all over the world and this can affect people’s health. However every one can choose what to eat every day. Mostly everybody, from developed societies, know the importance of having a healthy diet. Advances such as the information showed in the menus of fast food restaurants will help people to have a clever choice before they choose what to eat. Another important issue that I would like to mention is how medicine is changing. There are new discovers and treatments almost every week and that is an inequivoque sintom of how things are changing in order to improve the world’s health.

Recently, there have been a lot of discussions about health and whether it is going to improve or not. In my opinion, I think that people will become unhealthier in the future than they are now. There are many reasons that support the idea of people becoming unhealthy in the future. Firstly, one reason is that of food. People tend to eat more fast food nowadays. They tend to treat themselves with sweets and chocolate whenever they want. This appears to be because people are busier now than they used to be. So, people don’t have a chance to cook or even learn the art of cookery. Also, having a lot of unhealthy food can lead to obesity and it could be a serious issue in the future. Another reason is that technology is developing everyday. Young people enjoy buying new gadgets and the latest devices. This has a negative impact on their health, especially when they enjoy video games. Spending long hours looking at a screen can lead to bad eyesight and obesity as well. Yet another reason is that laziness is a big issue. Different forms of exercise might disappear in the future because people don’t like sports. Also, people prefer spending most of their time on the internet and the internet is growing every single day. Other people might disagree and say that health will improve in the future. They believe that new sports and new ways to exercise will appear in the future. However, I don’t think it can happen since the majority of people spend less time outdoors. Moreover, other people believe that technology will try and help people improve their health. For example, there have been some games released on the Wii console that makes people exercise but technology is developing more in a negative way. For instance, many phone industries are developing new applications everyday and today’s generation likes to follow every trend. This prevents people to go outside to exercise. They like to spend more time on the internet downloading new programmes or reading gossips about celebraties. This affects people’s health badly. In conclusion, I believe that people’s health is affected negatively by fast food, technology and sports and it will be a problem in the future.