You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write to your friend. In your letter: - explain what you would like to do - describe the work or studies you have been doing for the past few years - ask for help contacting an appropriate institution
Sample Response
Dear Anna,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to enquire aboutenquire some details about the Certified Internal Auditor (CIA) courses at a leading college in London. As you live there, I am hoping you would be able to guide me in choosing the best college for the course. As you know, I comehail from a family where everyone is involved in the financial sector. As a resultNeedless to say, I completed my degree atgot my tertiary education from a business school, and at present, I am working as an Internal Auditor in a textile corporation, but I have held the same positionhave been stuck with the same designation for more than 2 years. Therefore, in order to climb further up the corporate ladder, I would like to update my skills and knowledge, and the most plausible way to do that would be to get a foreign degree from a reputed college in the UK. Having spent considerable timea copious amount of hours researching the right institutions, I have narrowed down my options to just three colleges. I would like to ask for your assistanceask your assistance in getting in touch with those colleges. Perhaps you could senddispatch me their customised brochures or prospectuses since due to the highly complex nature of these programs, the information in the public domain is hard to find about these courses. I look forward to receiving your response. Warm wishes, Sameed
Why this response received Band 7.0
The letter clearly explains the intended course, relevant education and employment, and the specific help requested, so its purpose is fully developed. Its main limitation is an overly formal, sometimes unnatural register for a friend, with expressions such as 'dispatch me' and 'copious amount of hours.' The priority is to keep the detailed content but use warmer, more natural language and separate the background from the request.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
All three bullet points are well developed and the requested assistance is specific, but the highly formal register is not consistently appropriate for a friend.
Address Anna more naturally and ask in a friendly way whether she could contact the shortlisted colleges or obtain their prospectuses.
Coherence and Cohesion
The explanation moves logically from the course aim through professional background to the request, although the body lacks helpful paragraph divisions.
Separate the course goal, recent studies and work, and request for help into three concise body paragraphs.
Lexical Resource
The response demonstrates a wide vocabulary, but some elaborate choices such as 'hail from,' 'plausible,' and 'dispatch me' sound unnatural in a personal letter.
Choose natural personal-letter wording such as 'I come from,' 'the best way,' and 'could you send me.'
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Complex structures are frequently accurate and meaning remains clear, with occasional errors in prepositions, noun phrases, and combined linking structures.
Correct patterns such as 'enquire about,' 'ask for your assistance,' and avoid using 'since' together with 'due to' in one clause.
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IELTS General Training Writing Task 1
You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write to your friend. In your letter:
- explain what you would like to do
- describe the work or studies you have been doing for the past few years
- ask for help contacting an appropriate institution
Your response
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