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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: - describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly - explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours - suggest what should be done about the problem

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    Dear sir/mam, I am writing this letter to bring a disquieting issue of our locality to your notice regarding the litter disposition in our town ‘Virgomoon”. Our town has been suffering from a scourge of undisposed garbage owing to the lackadaisical nature of the cleanliness committee appointed by your council.

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    词汇资源
    6.0分
    语法范围与准确性
    6.0分

    Dear Sir or Madam, I cannot really believe that I am writing such a letter to you about the messy rubbish collecting situation in my neighbourhood. And I am hoping that your mediation would solve the problem.

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