Many today feel that most urgent problems can only be solved by international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample Response
There are those who claim that we can only solve pressing global issues today if countries work in concert. In my opinion, international cooperation holds some promise but it is difficult to align the priorities of self-interested nations.
Proponents argue that global issues require active participation from all countries. The clearest recent exampleThe best, most recent example of this is climate change. Threats to the environment are becoming more severe each yearbecoming more dire annually and these affect every nation on Earth equallythis affects every nation on Earth equally. Therefore, effective solutions involvethe best solutions involve signing international accords. These agreements force nations to abide by certain regulations and meet benchmarks in order to form a cohesive global policya cohesive, global policy that can mitigate and reverse the effects of climate change. If many governments are unwilling to commit, it is unlikely that individual nations will be willingindividual nations will then have the desire to make drastic changes and very little maymight be done to curb an imminent global catastrophe.
However, the accords mentioned above have often failedhave been notorious failures as each nation has its own prioritiesits own individual priorities. Many developed nations that already have well-developed green industries and eco-friendly policies in place are happy to sign agreements that benefit both the Earth and their own financial interests. Other nations, chiefly those in the Middle East whose economies rely on fossil fuel production and those in developing regions where the economic consequences would be direchiefly in the Middle East where their economies are reliant on fossil fuel production and in developing countries where the economic consequences would be dire, are less enthusiastic. Many poorer countries can also justly argue that they historically contributed little to current climate problemscontributed little to the current climate problems in the past so it is unfair to hinder their development now. This applies to issues beyond climate changeThis applies for issues outside climate change as nations will always be in conflict and international cooperation is therefore an impractical solution to important problems.
In conclusion, though the entire planet working in tandem would be an ideal approach, it will typically fail due to competing interests. It is more important that countries act on their own or with like-minded nations and not push for global reforms.
Why this response received Band 8.0
The response advances a clear, nuanced position and develops a coherent climate-change example with confident control of language. Its main limitation is the narrow evidence base: conclusions about most urgent problems are extended from one issue with little support for the broader claim. The highest-priority improvement is to test the argument against another major international problem, showing more convincingly why cooperation succeeds or fails across contexts.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
The essay answers the extent question with a consistent position and well-developed reasoning, but relies almost entirely on climate change to support a broad conclusion.
Add a contrasting urgent issue and explain how it supports or qualifies the claim that international cooperation is usually impractical.
Coherence and Cohesion
The argument progresses clearly from the case for cooperation to its practical limitations, with well-managed paragraphing and referencing.
Make the final generalisation beyond climate change more gradual by adding a short bridge from the example to the wider claim.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is flexible, precise, and suitably academic, though there is minor repetition and an occasional awkward collocation.
Replace repeated wording such as well-developed and refine phrases such as applies for issues to maintain consistently natural precision.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide variety of complex structures is handled with strong control, and only minor local weaknesses are evident.
Review agreement and reference in long sentences, particularly where plural nations are followed by singular place-based relative clauses.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Many today feel that most urgent problems can only be solved by international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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