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Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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    In the tech-savvy era, it is an irrefutable fact that humankind has progressed tremendously, and the current era is enriched with inventions. A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to have technology is spreads its bad impacts on the life of human beings or not.

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    The impact of technology on our lives is highly debatable with some expressing concerns, others, on the contrary, emphasising the positive developments it brings. This essay will discuss both perspectives and conclude by expressing that technology is indeed gradually taking control of our lives.

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