Process Diagram

The diagram shows the different stages in the production of woollen goods

Process diagram for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about Woollen Goods Production Process.
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  1. Band 7.5
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    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 8.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 7.5

    The chart illustrates the various steps in the process of making woollen products. Overall, there are 10 principal stages in this process, beginning with the rearing of sheep and ending with the finished goods.

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  2. Band 8.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 8.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 8.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 8.0

    The diagram illustrates how wool is produced for both personal and industrial use. Generally, it is clear that there are various steps involved, beginning with the sheep being sheared and ending with the woolen yarns being knitted or woven into commercially made jackets and carpets.

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