A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: - tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves - say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her - explain how to apply for the job
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Dear Jasmin, It's good to hear from you after a while, and I completely understand your interest in finding a job here in London. Luckily, a week or so ago I came across a teaching position that might be a good match for you considering your interest and skills.
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Dear Chen, I hope you and your parents are doing great! It’s been a while since we last caught up, and I was really glad to receive your letter.
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Dear Julian, I'm so glad to hear from you after such a long period of time since we both graduated from university. From your letter, it sounds like you've been quite busy travelling to some parts of Europe and doing a couple of part-time jobs.