You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: - give details of your study plans - explain why you want to get a part-time job - suggest how your friend could help you find a job
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Dear David, How are you doing lately? I hope everything's going well for you.
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Hi Sarah! We just spoke on the phone but it totally slipped my mind to let you know that I got accepted to the University of Melbourne and I’ll be headed to your city soon!
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Dear Thomas, I hope you are doing great. I'm excited to let you know that I'll be moving to Toronto next month to pursue my Master’s degree in Computer Science at the University of Toronto.