You are going to visit New Zealand for an 'English and Homestay' program. You have just received details of your homestay host family. Write your first letter to the family. In your letter: - introduce yourself - ask the family some questions to get information that is important to you - tell the family about your arrival date and time
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Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, I'm Milad Rahimi from India, have recently registered for a two-week English Homestay programme at your house in New Zealand. I am fascinated to have you as my mentor during the programme.
- Band 6.5View annotated correction →
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- Band 7.0
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Dear Mr and Mrs Ericsson, I hope you are doing great. I am Eoghan Antonio from Italy, would like to thank you for granting my application to host me for the English and Homestay programme at your house.
- Band 6.5View annotated correction →
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Dear Mr Nithan, I am Preeti Roy, a 22-year-old student from India. I applied for an English Homestay program at the University of Wellington and I have received a letter from the university, apprising me that you will be my host family.
- Band 7.5View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.5
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 7.0
Dear Mr Johnson, I have just received details of my English Homestay programme at your family and writing to introduce myself and ask for some information. I would like to thank you for agreeing to host me.
- Band 7.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 7.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 6.5
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.5
Dear Mr Albert, I am writing to thank you for agreeing to be my English and Homestay host. I would really appreciate some information from you and would like to inform you that I will arrive at your house in New Zealand in July.