Home General Task 1 SamplesDelaying a Rented Apartment Move-In

You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: - explain your situation - describe your problems - tell him/her when you think you can move in

Timed practice

Finish under time and see where you stand on each of the four criteria.

3 Corrections

Band 7.0
Task Achievement
Band 7.0
Coherence and Cohesion
Band 7.0
Lexical Resource
Band 6.5
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Band 7.0
Dear Mr Smith, I’ve recently agreed to rent your apartment, and as discussed, I was supposed to move there by August 1st. I’m afraid I cannot do so in August due to personal issues.
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Band 6.5
Task Achievement
Band 7.0
Coherence and Cohesion
Band 6.0
Lexical Resource
Band 6.5
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Band 6.0
Dear Mr Alfred, I am writing to inform you that I would not be able to move into your apartment, C-4, at the beginning of November as promised. Due to a professional reason, I am staying in Australia and will not be back before 28th November 2019.
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Band 7.0
Task Achievement
Band 8.0
Coherence and Cohesion
Band 7.0
Lexical Resource
Band 7.0
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Band 6.5
Dear Mrs Anna, I have recently agreed to rent your apartment, and I am supposed to move there on August 1st. I am afraid I cannot do so in August due to some personal problems.
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