Your parents will celebrate their 50th anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration and have a friend, Julia, who is a professional event planner. Write to Julia. In your letter: - explain why the occasion is special - ask for her assistance - set up a time to meet and discuss your plans
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Dear Melinda, Hope you are doing well with your life and career. I am also doing fine except that I am really struggling to put together a plan to celebrate my parent's 40th wedding anniversary in a very special manner.
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- Coherence and Cohesion
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- Lexical Resource
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- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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Dear Julia, Hope you are doing excellent. I am writing this letter because I need some advice from a professional event planner like you.