You play sports (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your teammate. In your letter: - say how you feel about the news - ask about the treatment in the hospital - suggest some ways of cheering him/her up
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- Band 7.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 7.5
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.0
- Lexical Resource
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- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 7.0
Dear Brian, I hope that you are feeling well and trying to make the best out of the worst situation. I have just heard the news about your accident from our team manager over the phone, and I must say that I was quite shocked to hear the sad news.
- Band 7.5View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 7.0
Dear Ahmed, How are you now? I was shocked to hear that you fell off the stairs all of a sudden and have had an injury to your foot.