Informal Letter

You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking Friend. In your letter: - Explain why you have moved - Describe the new apartment - Invite him to pay a visit

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  1. Band 7.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 8.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    Dear John, It's been such a long time since we've written to each other. I hope you and your family are doing well.

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  2. Band 7.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 7.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    Dear Baljeet, With all my excitement, I would like to tell you that I have shifted to a new accommodation in Saket. I moved here last weekend during auspicious time of Navratra.

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  3. Band 6.5
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    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    Dear John, Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to let you know that we moved to a new place last month.

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  4. Band 6.5
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    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    Dear Kola, Trust you are good, hope you have settled down at work. I am writing you to inform you that I have finally moved from my old house.

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  5. Band 6.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 5.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.0

    Dear Anthony, It is with great pleasure that I'm writing to you today since it's almost two months since we last saw each other, I really miss all the quality time we spent together during summer last year.I am writing this letter to inform you that I have recently moved out of my old apartment to a new one.

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