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Opinion Essay

The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.

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  1. Band 6.0
    Task Response
    Band 6.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    The new century comes with a different technology, inventions, political and social changes and also brings the new brutality in human history and the 21st century has already brought many changes in the world and human lives and certainly there are yet more changes to come.

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  2. Band 6.0
    Task Response
    Band 6.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.5

    As we have already stepped into the 21st century, it is inevitably true that enormous changes like advances in technology, heath care, and transportation will be visibly experienced. This essay will highlight the beneficial growth in our health sector and transport system that is possible to be made available in the new generation.

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