Opinion Essay

Some people say that animals should not be exploited for the benefit of human beings unless there is evidence that the animals do not suffer in any way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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    In recent years, there has been a growing concern about the exploitation of animals for human benefit. There are individuals who contend that animals should not be utilized for human benefit unless it can be proven that they are not subjected to any form of suffering.

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    There is controversy about exploiting animals for human needs like farming, lab experimenting and using them as a source of protein. Animal rights activists are trying to stop all modern and traditional activities, which involve killing animals or causing them to suffer.

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