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Opinion Essay

In some countries, the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. Meanwhile, we see some politicians enjoying power well into their eighties. Clearly, there is little agreement on an appropriate retirement age. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment?

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  1. Band 8.0
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    In today’s dynamic world, the determination of an appropriate retirement age has become a subject of ongoing discussion. While some countries mandate retirement at 50, others permit continued employment until 65 or even 70.

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    Since the inception of human civilisation, the debate over the retirement age is widespread. Although people usually continue working after retirement, in most countries retirement is regulated.

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