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Opinion Essay

A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Band 6.5
    Task Response
    Band 6.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 5.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    According to many, when a country's population is made up of individuals with diverse backgrounds, it helps this country become unique and interesting while also fostering the country's development.

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  2. Band 6.5
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    Global migration of people began with soaring industrialization and due to the major global wars. As a result, many developed nations experience the amalgamation of different cultures and traditions.

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