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Opinion Essay

Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Band 6.0
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    In the past, children had more leisure time to do various types of activities such as playing games, walking in the parks and gossiping with others. But, now they have no free time due to the fact that this world is becoming more competitive in terms of educational activities.

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  2. Band 6.0
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    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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    Children should spend quality time in extra curricular activities apart from the study. Some people think that leisure activities must include educational programs while some others including me, think that we do not require mixing up education with leisure activities.

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