Opinion Essay

People have different hobbies ranging from reading books to mountain hiking. According to some, hobbies must be difficult to be enjoyable while other oppose the idea. What is your viewpoint on this? Write no less than 250 words.

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    In general, hobbies are considered to be individual aspects. It varies based on individual interest and the social effects on their views and choices.

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    Many people contend that leisure activities should be extra challenging to be more fun. While this may provoke a person to reach his full potential, I disagree with this notion.

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