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Discuss the reasons why people define happiness differently and how to obtain happiness?

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    It is quite common that individuals hold different view towards happiness. I think the perception of happiness varies dramatically from one person to another as a result of the combined effect of individual characteristics and environmental factors.

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    The feeling of happiness is a complicated emotion that is unique to each individual. We all interpret this sentiment differently due to the vastness of our life experiences and the source of joy for a person might be hugely distinct from another person.

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