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Opinion Essay

Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Band 7.5
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    Whether economic growth in a well-off country would increase its citizens’ satisfaction has become a topic of discussion. In my opinion, I agree that while there is a limit to what money can bring, an increase in a country’s economic situation would always delight the people.

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    Many people assert that when a country is already affluent, further increases in economic wealth do not necessarily lead to greater satisfaction among its citizens. I tend to agree with this opinion, and in this essay, I will delve into the reasons supporting this viewpoint.

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  3. Band 8.0
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    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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    Many people believe that the additional increase in the national wealth of an affluent country does not necessarily lead to increased satisfaction and happiness among citizens. I completely agree with this opinion because individuals cannot derive more satisfaction from increased wealth due to hedonic adaptation and income disparity.

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