Opinion Essay

Government funding should be used to support sports and the arts in school rather than professional sports and arts for the general public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    It is perceived that financial support from the Government should be used for school games and crafts instead of expert sports and arts for the community. I totally agree with this idea because school recreations and creative arts are goal-oriented and beneficial to the government, community and school children.

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    The current issue is whether the government allocates their fund to students or the general public. Generally, people espouse the notion that authorities should provide funds to schools to support sports and the arts.

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