Opinion Essay

Modern communication systems benefit many people yet there are some that oppose to them. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement.

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    Contemporary communication tools yield positive results for their consumers but a host of people refute this statement. While it is observed a sizeable minority of negative attitude toward consequences of communication devices, I believe that these facilities such as TV, the Internet, computers, smart phones etc. play an indispensable role in our life.

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  2. Band 5.5
    Task Response
    Band 5.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 5.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.5

    Contemporary communication tools yield positive results for their consumers but a host of people refute this statement. While it is observed a sizeable minority of negative attitude toward consequences of communication devices, I believe that these facilities such as TV, the Internet, computers, smart phones etc. play an indispensable role in our life.

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