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Opinion Essay

In modern society, it is no longer necessary to slaughter animals for producing foodstuffs, or non-food products such as clothes or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    In an era of growing public concern over animal conservation, whether animals should be killed to produce food, clothing and medicine has sparked fierce debate. From my perspective, slaughtering animals for human needs can be justified, though this practice must be subject to strict regulation.

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  2. Band 8.0
    Task Response
    Band 8.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 8.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 8.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 8.0

    In an era of growing public concern over animal conservation, whether animals should be killed to produce food, clothing and medicine has sparked fierce debate. From my perspective, slaughtering animals for human needs can be justified, though this practice must be subject to strict regulation.

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