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People are not paying attention to environmental protection. What is the cause and suggest solutions to deal with this issue.

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    The focus of human civilisation has shifted from nurturing our natural habitat to exploiting it for personal gains. The dependence on natural resources has become so intensive that we have overused them to the point of extinction.

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    The environment is calling our name worldwide, especially with the frequent occurrence of natural disasters from tsunami to earthquakes. That is the acknowledged threat to the survival of humankind, but the truth remains that people seem to be busy with something else, rather than the mission of salvaging the world before it is too late.

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