Opinion Essay

In some countries, nowadays more and more people are choosing to live alone than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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    These days many people chose to live alone, especially in metropolitan areas and this rate is far higher in developed countries and seems like this has become quite normal there. I believe this trend has more negative consequences than the few positive outcomes it offers.

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    In the recent years, most people, particularly in developed countries, likely to opt for living independently. Although living solo come along with several drawbacks, I would consider this more of a positive development.

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