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Positive or Negative Development Essay

Nowadays online shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or negative development?

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    Online shopping today has achieved more popularity than physical store shopping in many parts of the world. I believe this is a negative development because it causes privacy and security concerns through phishing attempts and data breaches.

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Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages
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Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages
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