Problem and Solution Essay

Nowadays in many countries, young people don’t communicate with older people as much as they used to. Why is this happening? How could this situation be improved?

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    Globally, youth today interact less frequently with older generations than in the past. This trend can be attributed to the rapid development of technology and increasingly busy lifestyles.

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    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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    In this day and age, a large number of nations are grappling with the phenomenon that younger generations no longer communicate as frequently with their elders as they used to. There are various reasons why this situation has arisen and several solutions can be implemented in order to improve it.

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