It is often said that nowadays children are undisciplined because their parents are busy with their careers. Do you agree with this opinion? What could parents do to build a sense of discipline among children?

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Developing a sense of discipline among children is an important responsibility for parents as it determines a child’s future and overall social situation. However, many parents do not share enough quality time with their children due to career pressure and those couples, oftentimes, fail to teach their children moral values.