It is often said that nowadays children are undisciplined because their parents are busy with their careers. Do you agree with this opinion? What could parents do to build a sense of discipline among children?

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In contemporary times, there is a commonly held belief that modern-day children are undisciplined due to the career-oriented lifestyles of their parents. I partially agree with this perspective, and also believe that the lack of discipline among children is not solely attributable to parental careers.