Opinion Essay

Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Which point of view do you agree with?

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    Decent employment is a necessity to lead a standard life for everyone. In the employment market, many people keep on various rules and cultures.

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    The education is the backbone of a country's future, while a good job is a key factor for a better life. This topic is of particular importance because it affects everyone’s life.

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