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What are the possible effects of living long on an individual and on the whole society? Give some examples for and against according to your knowledge.

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    Mankind since ancient times has always looked for ways to increase the length of their life span. They believe that by living a healthy life free from everyday challenges and stresses in a countryside can help them to attain long life, while few are still cracking the myth to discover water well to achieve eternal life.

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  2. Band 6.5
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    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    Advancement in medical technology, better knowledge about medical science, and the invention of the cure for deadly diseases have greatly contributed to increased life expectancy these days. Both the individual and the society have been affected by this achievement.

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