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Some people say that people remember special gifts or presents that they receive. Why do you think that is?

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    Receiving gifts is always exciting and many people remember the gift for a long time. I think that all people like to receive presents from their relatives, friends, co-workers, and people they love and care about etc.

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    A gift is always special, but is there any special gifts one would remember? My answer would be a definite yes.

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    A person in his lifetime receives many gifts and presents and with the span of time he might forget about them. But special gifts are kind of gifts that he would remember for a long time or even in some cases forever.

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