Some people think that the government should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people. However, others argue that it should be decided by individuals and it is their responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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While some argue that the government should play a significant role in promoting and safeguarding public health, others contend that individuals should have the freedom to make their own choices regarding their lifestyle. This essay will explore both perspectives, arguing in favour of the view that it is a personal choice and responsibility.