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Discussion Essay

Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on different factors. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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  1. Band 7.0
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    The meaning of happiness is different to people, and thus some people argue that economic prosperity has a direct influence on happiness, while others claim that different other factors contribute to attaining happiness. This essay will explore both perspectives and argue that happiness depends on a number of things rather than just the money someone has.

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  2. Band 8.0
    Task Response
    Band 8.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 8.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 8.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 8.0

    The concept of personal happiness has long been a topic of debate. While some individuals believe that economic success is the key to happiness, others argue that happiness is influenced by a multitude of factors beyond financial prosperity.

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