Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Concerning the development of children, there are two different schools of thought. On the one hand, some people argue that children should be taught to be competitive to succeed later in life.