Opinion Essay

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    In today’s modern world, many students are going to university immediately after they finish school. However, the numbers of boys and girls studying in the universities are always not equal which leads to the assertion by the public that universities should receive the identical numbers of both genders in every course that they provide.

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    Some people argue that subjects offered by the universities should be filled by equal numbers of male and female students.

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