Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have been aware of this problem for a long time. Why do people do so little about it? How can we prevent animals and plants from going extinct?
Sample Response
The issue of species extinction is a urgentpressing global concern, and despite long-standing public awarenesslong-standing awareness, action has remained insufficientinsufficient action has been taken to address it. This essay will explore the reasons behind this inadequate responsethe inadequate response to this problem and propose ways to preventpotential solutions to prevent animals and plants from going extinct.
One significant reason for the limited action against species extinctionlack of action on species extinction is the tension between conservation and economic interestsconflict between conservation efforts and economic interests. Many industries, such as agriculture, logging, and mining, often prioritise profit over environmental protection. As a result, habitats are destroyed, leading to the loss of critical ecosystems that support diverse plant and animal species. Political factors and weak legislation also contributeFurthermore, political factors and a lack of strong legislative measures also contribute to slow conservation progressthe slow progress in conservation efforts. For example, the Amazon rainforest, home to diverse flora and faunaa vast array of flora and fauna, faces ongoing threats from deforestation due to logging and agricultural expansion.
To combat species extinction effectively, a multifaceted approach is required. First, governments must enact and enforce robust environmental regulations to prevent habitat destruction and illegal wildlife trade. Additionally, public awareness campaigns and education about the importance of biodiversity conservation are essential in mobilising communities to actively participate in conservation efforts. Collaborative initiatives between governments, NGOs, and local communities can lead to the establishment of protected areas and conservation programmes. For example, the efforts of the WWF in partnership with local communities in the Chitwan National Park, Nepal, have led to the recovery of endangered species such as the greater one-horned rhinoceros.
The alarming decline of animal and plant species demands immediate and effective action. By addressing the economic interests that contribute to habitat destruction and implementing robust conservation measures, we can prevent further species extinction. Only through comprehensive and committed efforts can we secure the survival of animals and plants for future generations.
Why this response received Band 8.5
The essay directly answers both questions through a well-developed account of economic and political barriers and a practical, multi-level set of conservation measures. Its examples, progression, and language are consistently precise; the main opportunity is only to sharpen the causal link between weak legislation and limited action rather than presenting them side by side. Preserve the focused structure while making that explanation slightly more explicit.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
Both causes and solutions are fully addressed with relevant explanation, concrete examples, and a clear emphasis on coordinated action.
Explain more explicitly how political incentives or enforcement failures allow economic interests to continue damaging habitats.
Coherence and Cohesion
The essay progresses seamlessly from the problem and causes to solutions and conclusion, with clear paragraph purposes and unobtrusive cohesion.
Keep the same structure while linking the legislative cause more directly to the regulatory solution for even tighter progression.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is wide, precise, and natural throughout, particularly in the discussion of biodiversity, regulation, habitat destruction, and collaboration.
Maintain this precision while avoiding repeated use of ‘conservation efforts’ when a context-specific alternative would be equally clear.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A broad range of complex structures is used accurately and fluently, with only negligible local imperfections.
Continue varying clause openings while preserving the strong control shown in long explanatory and example sentences.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have been aware of this problem for a long time. Why do people do so little about it? How can we prevent animals and plants from going extinct?
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