Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have been aware of this problem for a long time. Why do people do so little about it? How can we prevent animals and plants from going extinct?
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The earth is shared by millions of species, and they all have the right to survive and reproduce. While this is what we humans know, we do too little to save endangered species, even though many of them are on the verge of extinction due to our activities.
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The issue of species extinction is a pressing global concern, and despite long-standing awareness, insufficient action has been taken to address it. This essay will explore the reasons behind the inadequate response to this problem and propose potential solutions to prevent animals and plants from going extinct.