Some people believe that to reduce the time people spend commuting, parks and gardens close to city centres should be replaced by apartment buildings. Others disagree with this idea. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Band 5.5

To begin with, the supporting group believed this because people would be close to their destinations and traffic be brought down to a low level. When houses replace parks and gardens in the city’s centre, people will be proximal to the most visited places like workplaces, shops, and religious centres.