Opinion

People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than those in previous times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Band 7.0
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    Nowadays, people’s quality of life has tremendously improved compared to the previous centuries. The essential factors for this change are advancements in technology, improved infrastructure and various initiatives taken by the government to bring up citizens’ living standards.

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  2. Band 5.5
    Task Response
    Band 5.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 5.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.0

    Undoubtedly, the living standard of people changed with the advancement of technology. Although it has some grave repercussions for health; however, in the high-tech era, the community has improved the quality of life than in the ancient world.

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