While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many people attend university to pursue academic studies, but some argue that more individuals should be encouraged to take vocational training because of the shortage of skilled workers, such as electricians and plumbers. I fully agree with this view, as vocational education benefits both individuals and society.