The chart below shows the number of car trips taken by men and women for different purposes per day in a European city.
Sample Response
The bar chart illustrates how many car trips are made per day by men and womenmales and females for various purposesreasons in a European city.
Overall, the largest numbers of tripsthe most number of trips by car for both men and women are made for commuting to and from work and for shopping. In contrast, the fewest trips by both men and women arethe least number of trips made by both genders is for eating out.
For menIn terms of males, about 180 trips are made for travelling to and from work, compared to approximately 140 trips per day for shopping. In contrast, only 20 trips are made to visit friendstrips are for visiting friends and 15 trips for eating out. The number of car trips made to take childrenmade for taking children to school is around 130 per day, which is double that for entertainment purposes, at 65 per day.
Regarding women, the largest number of trips isare made for shopping, at 150, followed by commuting to work, at 130, and taking children to school, at 90. Women make about 50 trips for entertainment purposes, while meeting friends and eating out only make up 25 and 20 trips respectively.
Why this response received Band 7.5
The response is highly effective in selecting and accurately reporting the chart's key patterns and all twelve values, with a clear gender-based structure. The main limitation is a small cluster of awkward quantity expressions and agreement errors. Refine phrases such as the highest number and ensure singular quantity subjects take singular verbs to make an otherwise precise report more polished.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
The overview highlights the dominant and least common purposes, and the body accurately reports every value with useful comparisons.
Add one more direct cross-gender comparison, such as the marked difference in work or school trips, to sharpen the analysis.
Coherence and Cohesion
Information is organised into a clear introduction, overview, and separate male and female detail paragraphs with smooth progression.
Vary the links between figures slightly so repeated contrast and sequencing patterns remain unobtrusive.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is varied and mostly precise for purposes, quantities, and comparisons, with only occasional awkward combinations.
Replace expressions such as most number and trips make up with the highest number and accounted for.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
The response uses a good range of complex comparison structures accurately, though several number-related subject-verb agreement errors remain.
Check agreement after singular heads such as number, using the largest number is rather than are.
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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1
The chart below shows the number of car trips taken by men and women for different purposes per day in a European city.
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