The diagram below shows a school now and the plan for the school in 2025
Sample Response
The maps describe the current layout of a school as well as some proposals for its layoutproposals to its structure for the year 2025for a future year, 2025. Overall, though school facilities such as the main school, sports building and the football court are expected to remain unchanged, more sports areas like basketball and tennis courts are set to be built at the expense of the school playground in 2025. Of particular noteOf a particular note is the addition of a staff car parkaddition of new parking lots to the school campus. At present, the school is accessible from the main road to its east, from a parking lot in the north, which accommodates 200 cars. The main school building is sited at the center, flanked by threetwo basketball and four tennis courts to its east and a small canteen and a sports building to its west. There is also a large playground in the southern part of the school campus, with a football pitchfield to its south-west. Finally, a row of residential blocks isare located across the roadstreet from the school. The school campus is expected to see a several changescomplete makeover in 2025. While there is only one access point to the school area now, a new access road leading to the staff parking areaa south entrance leading to a new parking space will be available. A roundabout will be constructed in the north, which will connect the old parking area and a new one holding 20 spaces for staff. The tennis courts in the eastTennis courts in the east are set to be replaced by a new canteen, while the old one will be convertedwill have been converted into a science building. The playground will shrink considerablyby a third, giving way to relocatednew basketball and tennis courts. Delete#task1 270 words
Why this response received Band 6.5
The response uses varied, generally precise language and describes many present and planned features in a clear chronological sequence. Its main weakness is factual accuracy: the future parking area has 150 spaces, while the separate 20-space facility is for staff, and the account of entrances and connections is misleading. Prioritise checking spatial relationships and labels carefully before describing each major change.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
A clear overview and many key changes are included, but significant inaccuracies affect the account of parking capacity, access, and the roundabout.
Distinguish the 150-space main parking area from the 20-space staff parking area and describe their exact locations and road connections.
Coherence and Cohesion
The description follows a sensible present-to-future sequence, but the single long paragraph weakens the grouping of detailed information.
Separate the current layout and the 2025 plan into distinct body paragraphs with related changes grouped spatially.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is varied and often effective for locations and changes, though a few expressions such as proposals to its structure and football court are imprecise.
Prefer exact map terms such as proposed changes to the layout, football field, and parking area.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Complex structures are used flexibly and mostly accurately, with occasional agreement and phrasing errors.
Refine subject-verb agreement and prepositional phrasing, particularly in sentences describing rows of buildings and access from the road.
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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1
The diagram below shows a school now and the plan for the school in 2025
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