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The graph below presents the number of different airline flights coming to Hong Kong per week in 1980 and 2000.

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    The graph compares the number of flights from different airlines that reached to Hong Kong per week in 1980 and 2000. Generally speaking, the number of flights in 2000 remarkably increased and the highest number of flights to Hong Kong came from Thailand, Malaysia and Singapore.

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    The bar graph shows the number of incoming flights from different airlines to Hong Kong in a week both in 1980 and 2000. Overall, weekly incoming flights to Hong Kong increased significantly in 20 years and the majority of these flights came from Thailand, Singapore and Malaysia.

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    The bar chart shows the number of incoming flights from eight airlines to Hong Kong per week in 1980 and 2000. Overall, in 2000, Hong Kong received significantly more flights from these airlines compared to 1980.

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