You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter: - introduce yourself - ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes - explain why you need to break the contract.
Sample Response
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is John Nordstrom and I have been renting the flat on Parkway Boulevard from you for the past six months. As I'm sure you are aware, I have beenAs I'm sure you are aware I have been a good tenant throughoutduring this period. I always pay my rent on time and look after the flat. My rental agreement with you was for one year and the contract ends in January. Unfortunately, I have just learned that I needheard that I will need to leave the flat in November, which is, in fact, two months early. This is becauseThe reason for this is that my manager has asked me to return to Germanygo back to Germany earlier than planned and I am afraid this is beyond my control. As I am now unable to stay here until the end of the contract, I would be extremely grateful if you could release me from the agreement two months earlyrelease me from it early. I am awareI'm aware that this is not normally allowed but I hope you can understand my situation and return my deposit in fullstill return my deposit. Yours faithfully, John Nordstrom
Why this response received Band 8.0
The letter fully addresses the request, explains the unavoidable early departure clearly, and maintains an appropriately courteous formal tone throughout. Its main limitation is that the ideas are presented as one continuous block, which slightly weakens visual organisation; the highest-priority improvement is to separate the background, request, and closing conditions into distinct paragraphs while preserving the concise, precise language.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
The purpose is immediately clear, all three bullet points are fully covered, and the formal, persuasive tone suits an agency.
Strengthen the request further by briefly acknowledging any reasonable contractual procedure the agency may require.
Coherence and Cohesion
Information progresses logically from the tenancy background through the reason for leaving to the specific request.
Use distinct paragraphs for the introduction, explanation, and requested resolution to make the structure easier to scan.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is varied, precise, and well matched to a formal request, with natural phrases such as "release me from it early."
Refine the few general expressions by specifying the desired arrangements for the deposit and early termination.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide range of sentence structures is used accurately, and the few minor punctuation issues do not impede meaning.
Add a comma after the introductory clause in "As I'm sure you are aware" to polish sentence control.
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IELTS General Training Writing Task 1
You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter:
- introduce yourself
- ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes
- explain why you need to break the contract.
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