You need to take two weeks off work to deal with a family matter. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - explain why you need the time off - say when you would like to take it - suggest how your work could be covered
Sample Response
Dear Mr Baker,
I am writing to requestask for two weeks' leavetwo weeks of leave in September. My mother is undergoinghaving an operation on 8 September, and I will need to look after her at home while she recovers.
I would like to take leavetake the time off from Monday 7 September to Friday 18 September. I have checked the department calendar, and there are no client meetings scheduled during that period. If those dates are inconvenientdifficult for the team, I would be happy to move the second week to October.
Regarding work coverageAs for my work, I have already spoken to Kenji, and he has agreed to cover the weekly reports while I am away. I will also prepare detailed notes on the two current projects before I leave, and I will update the shared folder so that the team can find the client files without me. If any urgent matter arisesIf anything urgent comes up, I will be reachable by email.
I would be grateful if you could let me know whether you can approve this leave requestwhether this is possible.
Yours sincerely, Taro Yamada
Why this response received Band 8.0
The letter is highly effective: it gives a clear reason and exact dates, anticipates scheduling concerns, and offers detailed, practical cover arrangements in a professional tone. There is no substantial weakness, although the closing presentation and a few expressions could be polished for maximum formal precision. Put the complimentary close and name on separate lines and keep the otherwise excellent specificity and concision.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
All three bullet points are fully and specifically addressed, with a clear purpose, well-developed arrangements, and an appropriate managerial register.
For an even more complete request, briefly indicate whether you will remain contactable throughout both weeks or only for urgent matters.
Coherence and Cohesion
The response is logically organised into focused paragraphs, and each stage of the request follows naturally from the previous one.
Separate the complimentary close and the writer's name onto their own lines to sharpen the conventional letter structure.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is precise, natural, and well suited to a professional leave request, including effective detail about reports, projects, and client files.
Continue using this level of specificity while varying the repeated phrase 'I will' where a natural alternative is available.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Complex and simple structures are varied and consistently accurate, with punctuation supporting clear, fluent reading.
Preserve this strong control while experimenting with one more compact participle or relative-clause structure where it remains natural.
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IELTS General Training Writing Task 1
You need to take two weeks off work to deal with a family matter. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
- explain why you need the time off
- say when you would like to take it
- suggest how your work could be covered
Your response
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