You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write to your friend. In your letter: - explain what you would like to do - describe the work or studies you have been doing for the past few years - ask for help contacting an appropriate institution
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Dear Rachel, Hope you are doing fine. I am sorry that I have not written to you for a long.
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Dear Mary, It's been a long since I have heard from you. Hope you are doing great.
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Dear Rachel, Hope you are doing fine. I am sorry that I have not written to you for a long.
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Dear Sam, Hope you are fine. I am now in Vizag and working for a large architectural consultancy firm.
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Dear Mary, It's been a long since I have heard from you. Hope you are doing great.
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Dear Aparna, Hope you are doing great and enjoying your new job. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am planning to take a course at a college in your city.
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Dear Robert, It seems like ages since we last met and time indeed flies. I am very sorry that I had not been in touch with you as frequently as I should have in the last few months.
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Dear Mimi, Hope you are doing excellent. I regret that I haven't been in touch with you for a couple of months.
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Dear Anna, I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to enquire some details about the Certified Internal Auditor (CIA) courses at a leading college in London.