首页雅思 G 类 Task 1 范文Apologising for Missing a Friend’s Birthday

One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - apologise for missing the birthday celebration - explain why you missed it and why you didn't - tell your friend and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry Dear..................,

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Dear Benjamin, Hope you are enjoying your life and your newly-found career. But, before anything else, please allow me to apologize to you first since I couldn’t attend your birthday.
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Dear Pollock, I'm so sorry that I missed your birthday party and I hope you are not mad at me. I was so excited to have been invited to your birthday and I even had plans for the occasion.
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